Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Scrum recently have got dishes anytime without to think hardly, numerous restaurant, cafe and food court had provide their product to serve your stomach business. Foods are meaningful for everyone, we cannot through the days next because the big parts energy produced by food constantly.
Being society in this epoch surely seems very difficult, it was because there are plenty reasons which had influence them. They will be busy every each day with their daily activity. Sometimes they have time for relaxing their mind after exhausted of work only for a few minutes, that is sounds eerie but that things just happened for several individuals. They must manage their time-table for caring concern healthy, it is very essential to survive in this Earth and in this era all kinds of food become easier to find it.
Many people feel that being instant food consumer can help their problems about food availability and keep their life existence, despite they never know what effect will force them. Consequently this case can touch weak spot their anti-body,let me illustrate, working hard with routine to consume junk food it is a bad choice even though that can economize your time because you never suppose what substances contained in the food.
Finding the way to realize what food you will be swallow include the contents of it, there is nothing precious than a fit physically. As we know how easier inhabitants and us to get food absolutely energy for supporting endurance body, however there are always depends on them and us to sort out which good food what we need. Otherwise, you will get disease like obesity cause of unhealthy meal.
In conclusion, my own view food already changed concern the scrums lifestyle nowadays in which too easy find dishes. As a result, all of us will not confusing to get foods and will not feel starving for along time. This thing made us grateful also affect to continue live life.
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Sentence: Scrum recently have got dishes anytime without to think hardly, numerous resto, cafe and food court had provide their product to serve your stomach business.
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Suggestion: Refer to without and to
Description: A verb 'to have', past tense is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to had and provide
Sentence: Foods are meaningful for everyone, we cannot through the days next because the big parts energy produced by food constantly.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to cannot and through
Sentence: Being society in this epoch surely seems very difficult, it was because there are plenty reasons which had influence them.
Description: A verb 'to have', past tense is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to had and influence
Sentence: Sometimes they have time for relaxing their mind after exhausted of work only for a few minutes, that is sounds eerie but that things just happened for several individuals.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to is and sounds
Sentence: Many people feel that being instant food consumer can help their problems about food availabilities and keep their life existence, despite they never know what effect will force them.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to despite and they
Sentence: Finding the way to realize what food you will be swallow include the contents of it, there is nothing precious than a fit physically.
Description: The fragment swallow include the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace include with verb, past tense
Sentence: As a result, all of us will not confusing to get foods and will not feel starving for along time.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to for and along
Sentence: They will be busy every each day with their daily activitiy.
Error: activitiy Suggestion: activity
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
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No. of Words: 326 350
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No. of Different Words: 210 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.249 4.7
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