Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
As technology is becoming better day by day, it is common today, that it has changed the way many people interact with each other.
This can be seen mostly in various internet websites such as facebook and gmail, where people chat with each other by sending different messages. Moreover, most of them use these websites in order to get know new people all around the world, who use the same websites as they do, and be friends with them. Besides this, some users find their soulmates using the same way as the previous ones do. There are many pros and cons of likewise situations.
First of all, I want to write about advantages of people using the internet in order to interact and get in touch with others. One of the pros is that people may chat with each other as often as they want to even if they are in different countries. The main point is that both of them remain chatting at their own home and they do not need to go anywhere else. Furthermore, they save time using the internet for chatting.
On the other hand, individuals waste their time, too. The reason why people are wasting it, is that they spend time for waiting the computer connecting to the internet and typing the message to other users. Meanwhile, they start visiting other websites. As a result, people waste their time more than they used to. Following the analyzing of this, it can be clearly seen, that there are various disadvantages, too.
To recapitulate, technology affected relationships people make in reality and in my personal opinion, it has become a negative development.
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