Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make.Does it have a positive or negative impact?
Technology has progressed dramatically along the past decades in every field of our life.Our lives have been changed greatly with advent of technology.This progress has both positive and negative ramifications on how we interact with each other and maintain relationships.This is a heated topic for debate and need to be scrutinized.
To begin with,in recent years,increasing number of people select internet or mobile phones to develop their personal and social relationships.To be clear,people are dependent on social networking sites like Facebook,Twitter to build a strong social relationship.T...
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