In order to learn language well, we should also learn about the country as well as the culture and lifestyle of people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that we recommend training a language correctly for improvement our communication skill in which to support our activities. While I accept that we also require learning about the culture and lifestyle of the people who speak it.
Training on language capability is an earlier step to learn a country because we can know about character of the country. In fact, all nations use language everyday for communication. Therefore, with taking interest on speaking skill can help us to interact with people in the world. It means that language is the entry point for people to have a wide networking in society.
In spite of training our language, it will be more effective if we try to take an extra attention in culture and lifestyle from the natives. It can give us additional experience about how they use the language in their daily life. Furthermore, we able to capture about value and believe that impact their thought and activity. They keep the rules along to make every movements are on the right track is the more important aspect that we should know if we want to know about s country. Then, we need to concern about lifestyle that recently happen among the nations to know routines and favorite activities. For example we able to check when they have time for working, refreshing, social and praying. It will be the same among people as common activities. The more personally is having a preference in their activity. Recently, gathering become a habit in public instead of staying in own home. Meeting friends mostly arranged in their favourite culinary place because they expect a pleasant atmosphere for sharing and chatting.
According to make a comprehensive learning about the country, balancing on language, culture and lifestyle is an asset to be concerned. It regards the unity of them that could not be separated because they have correlation in social aspect.
In conclusion, I would argue that learning language effectively can improve our knowledge about country. But, I believe that it is the same important to have an additional experience about culture and lifestyle for wider perspective about the nation.
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