People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that citizens need to concern about paying-tax responsibility. While I accept that issue, I believe that there are a lot of reasons that permit people to make amount portion from their salaries.
Having attention in paying tax among people is not only because of following the regulation, but also can reflect a behavior. The awareness means that people participate in this obligation based on willingness instead of fearing of punishment. Then, if it becomes a culture, it will be easier for stakeholder to involve the nations in development of their country. It may also give people a better life.
On the other hand, people often meet some considerations of paying the tax. As a social, they are an unique that have complex needs. Inappropriate incomes make people have a suffering in getting the necessity. Moreover, difficulty of financial management causes misbalancing in demand and income. However, the overcome is undelivered impact of tax advantages. They feel the country still has no change in vital sectors. It makes people have to take a big effort to go out from suffering life.
Consequently, employees are required to arrange a rational portion from their salaries. Mostly, every month officers need to put the housing on their expenses. All of parents should calculate education fees for their children include book, uniform and dictate. Unpredictable condition such as getting sick requires anticipated budgeting. This way makes health insurance become a vital expenditure. Food can be an expensive daily need for single nonpermanent-residences because they do not have members for sharing. Another addition is complementary needs that mostly require extra money.
Based on conditions above, policymaker should take a real progress on improving public services if they will make an obligation for the tax payment. Therefore, the government can gain people’s attention for participating on development with paying the tax. Furthermore, the most important is they complete their responsibility because of their initiatives. As a result, awareness culture becomes a reason for nations to take a part in public regulation.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for ignoring and against tax regulation. But, I believe that people have some considerations to manage their financial effectively.
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Furthermore, the most important is they complete their responsibility because of their initiatives.
Furthermore, the most important thing is that they complete their responsibility because of their initiatives.
Having attention in paying tax among people is not only because of following the regulation, but also can reflect a behavior.
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