People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that citizens must save their salary and not need to pay tax to government. While I accept that many people do not want to lose their money, I believe that people should pay tax to develop country.

Several reason that People could save their money. Firstly, People have many children whom They must pay children tuition fee and buy a lot of stuff for children school facilities. Secondly, sometimes the money is not enough to fulfill their living cost because People have many necessary need to survive in their living. The last important thing that People must save their money to make legacy for their next generation. At this time, People always prepare their wealth for their children. They want to exact their children will live well in future.

However, Citizens should pay impost to state for building their country. Citizens must be aware that country needs to be established especially for developing country. For example, Government have responsibility to build and repair school facilities. If The country have good school facilities, They will get intelligent human resources. On the other hand, People must give their money for the government because They must help government to decrease level of poverty in the country. Government strive to make citizens living to get better than before. It is difficult to be realized and need more funding. One of resource of the funding is tax from citizens.

It can be concluded, that Citizens can collect their income and They could give a little of their money to develop country.

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Sentence: Government strive to make citizens living to get better than before.
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Sentence: However, Citizens should pay impost to state for building their country.
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