People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that citizen prefer to save their gain for their own necessity. While I accept some views argue that tax is not major citizen responsibility, I believe that tax has aim for country development.

Some people argue that it is better if they earn money to fulfill their daily necessity. Whereas salary from state sometimes is not proper with daily maintenance. People believe that tax is not major citizen responsibility, it should be an obligation for all citizen to give high respect for assisting country essential and keeping great name of the country. Furthermore, the reason why people are not interested to be tax-payer is because the government merely give much emphasis on collections rather than to service for the citizen. Adventages of tax are less allocated in proper segment and cluster. These become huge problems throughout some cases which prove a lot of weak management of tax administration, even part of government abuse tax for their self-interest.

Although there are a lot of drawbacks of tax, I believe that tax has benefits which can bring country towards developed country. Every state needs tax to support development of the country, especially to provide public facilities such as construction of main-road, bridge, and public building. Not only for establish part of country, tax allocated for facilitating pupils to have base oof education at least. Mostly country gives subsidy for important need of citizen, such as education. Therefore, with regularly paid tax, it means that people support goverment’s aim to increase citizen standard of living.

In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against whether should people pay tax to the state or not. My explanations above have already told more about that. However I suggest, as the good citizen, to pay tax as it should be.

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Sentence: It is true that citizen prefer to save their gain for their own necessity.
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