Police in some countries like in England don’t carry guns. Some do not approve of this because they think that police with guns gives them security. Others think that police carrying guns decreases crimes. What is your opinion?
Assuredly, in the world we live today, the rate of crime is increasing day by day. It is clearly can be seen even in most major countries famed for its safety. The police are deemed as the security services carrying out this responsibility in society. The issue of whether the police should carry guns with them or not has opened a matter for wide-ranging debate.
Some hold that, it is not acceptable for police to take guns with them. The reason for thinking that is to attitude “tolerantly” and not cause an injury for even guilty people in public. The best way for preventing crime is to be punished criminals by court. However, the court should pass verdict on them as making pay fine or sending to prison.
Coming to others, they approve that police have to carry revolvers with them at any occasion. They are responsible to provide society in security and peace. It is not always possible to apprehend the person who committed a crime without guns. Take some countries for example, it is permitted for police to kill a criminal at the fighting accident when they can not avert it. Moreover, it is suitable way to be a good deterrent by carrying guns, because criminal can through any crime out glimpsing the gun on police.
In a conclusion I put it down saying that police should not be without their guns. In addition, it must be accepted that, guns not always cause fatal accidents or fights, on the contrary it can be a brilliant tool for preventing it as well.
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Look at those flaws: No. of
Look at those flaws:
No. of Words: 263 350
No. of Different Words: 142 200
Sentence Length SD: 4.938 7.5
The big problem to prevent a high mark is No. of Different Words: 142.
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Sentence Length SD is low means you have a lot of sentences with the same length. Need more sentences varieties.
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i am also new here, have found it recently.yes it is very helpful site and i am extremely grateful to all you for valuable efforts. i didn't get this numbers at first. so will pay attention as much as possible.
but most people say that it is a demerit of writing over 270 words.
No, it is wrong. Write as
No, it is wrong. Write as much as possible. For those to take GRE/GMAT exams, they can write about 500 words in half an hour, while you have 40 minutes for this IELTS task. 350 words are not too much.
Sentence: It is clearly can be seen even in most major countries famed for its safety.
Description: The fragment is clearly can is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: remove is
Sentence: The reason for thinking that is to attitude tolerantly and not cause an injury for even guilty people in public.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to attitude and tolerantly
flaws:
No. of Words: 263 350
No. of Different Words: 142 200
Sentence Length SD: 4.938 7.5
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 263 350
No. of Characters: 1178 1500
No. of Different Words: 142 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.027 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.479 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.454 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 83 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.938 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.267 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.32 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.522 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.111 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5