Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth with poorer nations by providing them with things such as food and education? Or is this the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens?
It is impossible to argue against the fact that there are still myriad countries suffering from famine and lack of education in contemporary life. One nation gets poor depending on whether its country’s land fruitful and productive or not. As settling in a globe developed countries should assist those nations which are in dire need.
A good example would be better clarify my point of view. Fatal famine diffused in Somaila, Eastern Africa as being arid country for several years. Despite the fact there is noticeable unavailability of modern technology like speed internet, this unpleasant news was spread all around the world. Many journalists were involved in taking photographs of skinny children covered in mosquitoes and flies and published it in newspapers, announced in broadcasting and on websites. However, many foundations were created by ordinary people in many countries, also in Azerbaijan to assist those people in Somalia by sending products and clothes, depositing money for digging wells prior to decrease thirst and aridity.
Moreover Turkish government has been sending its well-educated teachers to the countries with shortage of education for many years. To my mind it is really appealing job of some countries and nations which can share their not only wealth, but also simple knowledge they own.
Some people can help by gathering together a society where human beings suffer from poverty, war and drought. It should not be obligatory, but it can only accelerate the feeling and enthusiasm for ability of sharing and true humanity. But it would be more reasonable for government to look after the nation, because it could help more, rather than countable people.
As a nutshell, government should take care of its population if it able to do without any avoidance. If a government can not afford of welfare and care for nation because of poverty or drought then another nations with highly power and wealth should involved in assistance by providing any products or certain facilities.
Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
---|---|---|---|
2019-12-06 | manu ch | 56 | view |
2019-11-03 | VINAY KHANDURI | 11 | view |
2018-06-23 | Jagroop Brar | 61 | view |
2016-03-20 | websterpreparation | 70 | view |
2014-03-02 | Ayash | 60 | view |
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth with poorer nations by providing them with things such as food and education? Or is this the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens? 60
- Children today play very violent games This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world What are your opinions on this 78
- Some people think that students who don’t take break in studies between the high school and the university are at disadvantage compared to students who travel and work after high school further continuing their education. Do you agree or disagree? 75
- Police in some countries like in England don’t carry guns. Some do not approve of this because they think that police with guns gives them security. Others think that police carrying guns decreases crimes. What is your opinion? 71
- More and more fathers taking a break from their careers so that they can stay at home and take care of their children while their wives work This is better for the family than having both parents work full time To what extent do you agree or disagree 88
Comments
Thanks a lot for checking and
Thanks a lot for checking and tracking the mistakes I have made.But the score is invisible.Could you kindly write it again please?
You didn't develop the essay
You didn't develop the essay exactly right on the topic, so we din't give it marks. Read the topic and think about why. The third paragraph and the fourth paragraph have issues.
The essay may get 7.0 if it is properly developed.
Yeah you are right.I will try
Yeah you are right.I will try to write it again..
flaws:
The essay is not exactly right on the topic.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: ? out of 9
Category: ? Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 324 350
No. of Characters: 1657 1500
No. of Different Words: 202 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.243 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.114 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.697 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 133 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.012 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.296 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.575 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.039 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5