At present, science has been developing at a high speed, but people still have a high opinion of artists. What can the arts tell us of the life that science cannot?
In this contemporary time, it is understandably that there are large numbers fast-speed science advancements. However, while some inhabitants focus on science development, others endorse art with high appreciation. In this essay I would discuss certain points in art whereby science could not provide.
First of all, aesthetics point in an art object. It is merely art which could express aesthetically feel with combining several aspects: shape, texture, and color- in one piece that quite amuse art-lover. To exemplify, Monalisa painting, is recognized as a Da Vinci’s masterpiece and renowned as world best painting, attracted million art-spectators for centuries because this renaissance painting has sophisticated aspects: the painting object’s expression and position- still hide some mysteries until today. The spectators interested because they enjoyed each detail of this painting. Furthermore, it is Monalisa which is a favorite art’s piece to research for numerous researchers to deduce its inference meaning behind the complex aspects. They used many newest technology devices, such as scanner, x-ray, and detector to analyze data, then compose hypotheses to answer Monalisa’s secret.
Indeed, art also has exclusives. Whereas science progression has been running very fast, sometimes have not it construct an imitation of several art objects. While science might create an imitation of Monalisa, numerous artists who like classical art suspected the idea is questionable. Apropos to Discovery Channel, despite scientist professed a lot of experiments to copy the famous object Monalisa, they never created a perfect result because- form, material, and emotion: details that quite difficult to pursue. Also, this is a matter that caused numerous art-lover believe an art is more valuable and priceless than a sophisticated science thing.
To put them all in a nutshell, although the progression of science has been moved at a flash speed, it could not give some points, whence art could provide, especially in aesthetics and exclusives.
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could you please tell me why
could you please tell me why this one not receive a sticky mark? what is the difference between 7.5 with sticky, and 7.5 without sticky? despite the point of coherence is good, it would not guarantee a sticky mark? "and exclusive" is just a type mistake, i wrote this essay first on a paper then typed it.
my apologize i just want to learn and understand, no offense purpose, :. thank you very much admin
A sticky tag means the essay
A sticky tag means the essay is around 7.5 - 8.0 or over.
The problems of your essays are still grammatical issues and language, though they are not big.
Take an example, read this sentence 'Apropos to Discovery Channel, despite scientist professed a lot of experiments to copy the famous object Monalisa, ...'.
The essay E-rater didn't figure out there is a grammar error, but when we re-evaluate the essay, it lost the credits quickly because you used 'despite' wrongly here.
Talking about the language, read this sentence "Whereas science progression has been running very fast, sometimes have not it construct an imitation of several art objects."
What does it mean "have not it construct"? when we read it, we consider the essay writing is not professional.
Our suggestions: First and most, no any grammatical issues, second, develop sentences smoothly. Read essays by Tessy james, learn how she developed sentences. It will give you great help.
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that's all of my questions,
that's all of my questions, thank you very much!
Sentence: In this contemporary time, it is understandably that there are large numbers fast-speed science advancements.
Description: The fragment is understandably that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace understandably with adjective
Sentence: While science might create an imitation of Monalisa, numerous artists who fanatic to classical art suspected the idea is questionable.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to who and fanatic
Sentence: To put them all in a nutshell, although the progression of science has been moved at a flash speed, it could not give some points, whence art could provide, especially in aesthetics andexclusives.
Error: andexclusives Suggestion: and exclusives
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No. of Different Words: 198 200
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
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