Recently some people can work from home using modern technology. Some think this is only benefits workers, but not the employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that with advancement of new technology, working from home has becoming possible in today's era. Nevertheless, some people think that the development of technology only brought benefits for the worker but not the employer. While I agree with that statement, I believe that not only workers would gain advantages but also to the employers.
With the development of modern technology such as internet, mobile phone, 'tablet' etc, working from home has brought some beneficial for workers to carry on their tasks effectively and efficiently. Technology has provide worker with the freedom to start their shift. For instant, employee does not have to worry of getting to work late. Not only that, working from home with modern technology would also safe their time in commuting from home to office. additionally, in olden days, for workers to send an important document, they may have to type with typewriter and send it via post. However now, workers are able to use technology such as Microsoft Word to do editing and perhaps sent the document via email which only take few second to reach the recipients.
Not only benefits the workers, technology could also bring advantages to them employer in many ways. Firstly, employers does not have to spend their money on expenditure. Apart from saving money for expenditure, employer could also save money from setting up meeting which may require venue, refreshment, etc. Whereas with the availability of technology, meeting can be done via video conferencing. Secondly, many technology gadget that are available now are portable, handy and very reliable and because of these features, employers could perform their work at anytime and anywhere and with that, they do not need to go to office to do their work. Additionally, technology such as internet is a good source of information and it cost nothing to publish or access information on the internet.
For the reasons mentioned above, modern technology not only bring benefits for the workers but also bring advantages to the employer who prefer to work from home
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working from home has becoming possible in today's era.
working from home has been becoming possible in today's era.
Sentence: Technology has provide worker with the freedom to start their shift.
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employers does not have to spend
employers do not have to spend
Sentence: Not only that, working from home with modern technology would also safe their time in commuting from home to office. additionally, in olden days, for workers to send an important document, they may have to type with typewriter and send it via post.
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many technology gadget that are available now are portable
many technology gadgets that are available now are portable
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