In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What are the causes and measurements?
Nowadays, in most modern countries, people are suffering from obesity and related health problems. Children, in particular, are the most victims of the side effects of this modern lifestyle. Needless to say, dramatic advances in nation's hobbies and feeding attitudes play a pivotal role in the current trend. Bellow, some solutions will be represented in order to tackle the problem.
On the one hand, children are increasingly turing to sedentary activities in their leisure times. In other words, thanks to the technological advances, children are spending their spare times sitting in front of screens playing electrical games rather than going outside to attend in physical activities such as playing soccer. Therefore, our young generation has confronted to gaining weight and following undesirable health issues such as cardiovascular failures.
However, another reason behind this taking on weight is people's feeding habits. Nowadays, people prefer to eat fast foods more than home made meals. Obviously, fast foods and processed foods are the main source of extra fats. Therefore, not only do these kind of foods make us fat but also they are strip of nutrients.
On the other hand, there are numerous solutions to acquire our lost fitness and cherish the preciousness of health. Firstly,government should erect public services in the form of sport equipment probably aside with the huge attractive billboards with some positive statements about their effects on both physical and mental healths. Hence, this will caught citizens' attractions and entice them to utilize free equipment.
Secondly, the media is subjected to encourage people towards having healthier and more nourishment foods. Some TV programs for instance, should be allocated to public awareness of the negative impacts of fast foods such as pizzas and sandwiches on their fitness and health.
To warp up, health is a valuable gift to all of us that we should care about. Moreover, the pattern of our living has changed into having motionless lives. Also, our attitudes towards foods has switched remarkably. Thus, the government and mass media should make a balance to the way people are handling with the fraud of the modern life.
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Nowadays, in most modern
Nowadays, in most modern countries, people are suffering from obesity and related health problems. Children, in particular, are the most victims of the side effects of this modern lifestyle. Needless to say, dramatic advances in nation's hobbies and feeding attitudes play a pivotal role in the current trend. Bellow, some solutions will be represented in order to tackle the problem.
On the one hand, children are increasingly turing to sedentary activities in their leisure times. In other words, thanks to the technological advances, children are spending their spare times sitting in front of screens playing electrical games rather than going outside to attend in physical activities such as playing soccer. Therefore, our young generation has confronted to gaining weight and following undesirable health issues such as cardiovascular failures. Another reason behind this taking on weight is people's feeding habits. Nowadays, people prefer to eat fast foods more than home made meals. Obviously, fast foods and processed foods are the main source of extra fats. Therefore, not only do these kind of foods make us fat but also they are strip of nutrients.
On the other hand, there are numerous solutions to acquire our lost fitness and cherish the preciousness of health. Firstly,government should erect public services in the form of sport equipment probably aside with the huge attractive billboards with some positive statements about their effects on both physical and mental healths. Hence, this will caught citizens' attractions and entice them to utilize free equipment. Secondly, the media is subjected to encourage people towards having healthier and more nourishment foods. Some TV programs for instance, should be allocated to public awareness of the negative impacts of fast foods such as pizzas and sandwiches on their fitness and health.
To warp up, health is a valuable gift to all of us that we should care about. The government and mass media should make a balance to the way people are handling with the fraud of the modern life.
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oh thank you, how about my
oh thank you, how about my spelling mistake? you counted "on the other hand" as a spelling error?
No. There is only one
No. There is only one spelling error:
Error: turing Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: On the one hand, children are increasingly turing to sedentary activities in their leisure times.
Error: turing Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
It is not well organized. Look at the one below we modified a little which can get 8.0.
Be sensitive to use 'On the other hand', 'However','Nonetheless' in the essays.
'On the other hand' means However. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'
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