In some countries, young people are encouraged to travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. Give reasons for your answer and include an

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, it seem that young people are fostered to travel before starting university studies. This raise question as to whether the overall impact os this trend is negative or positive and my essay aims to highlight both.

Firstly, It is undeniable fact that spending short time travelling after graduation high school have some greatly effect to young people's life. A good salient example of this is volunteer activity in some poor nations - which help youthful people to have a insight about the real life as severe diseases as well as massive gap between poor and rich in modern society. Moreover, thanks to traveling, teenager have more opportunities to be exposed to different culture, custom and lifestyle in many countries. From my view, I would contend that travelling in short holiday period is generally positive for mature process of teenager.

Nevertheless, there are also dangerous involved in long break. A occasionally problem seen in young people who take a long break rather than prepare knowledge is highly likely to have bad score in first year in university. In addition to this issue, though, some young people have tendency to skip university because of some badly habit like alcoholism of drug abuse - which is received in journey have changed their attitude about education in university. Obviously, travelling can be harmful impact to individuals that take a long trip before enrolling in university.

By way of conclusion, It is also important to recognize that young people should raise awareness about the value of time in order to have right decision on using time

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