Some governments say how many children a family can have in their country. They may control the number of children has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way.
Do you agree or disagree?
Today increased population has become a heating issue for most of the governments to think about. Some people argue that one way to control population is to control number of children by applying tax. In this essay, I will contend more than one reason to support their view.
The foremost reason is that government is a responsible authority for the good or bad of the nation. Increased population also uplifts worse situations, especially, in an undeveloped and developing countries. For instance, more children mean more mouth to feed. However, poor people, who are living in slums, do not afford...
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The next supporting point is that this is not only the concern of population but also of about the environment.
The next supporting point is that this is not only the concern of the population but also the environment.
Sentence: This is so because more population means more house to build.
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Sentence: Applying tax does not control liberty of people but it should taken from positive guidance viewpoint.
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Sentence: Consequently, people are cutting the trees and destroying the natural nresources.
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