Some People believe that children should be allowed to home and play until they are six or seven years.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.
What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age.
Today education is considered as symbol of success and basic education contribute a vital role in personality building. Schools are taken great part to provide initial learning for children. Early age education trend is being incorporated from a couple of years, however some people dislike this culture and give importance to send their young children after six or seven years.Before jump to any conclusion we need to rationalize both the options and their practical impact.
Childhood stage is very important for any young children and the have a social right to enjoy this age at their home with parents because they could face an extra study load in case of early admission. Another important factor to avoid early education is week relationship with parents, as children spend a lot of time in school and obviously suffer from parents love(Specially mother) who is available most of the time at home with them. Children feel a certain level of responsibility if they start schooling in their early age for example they involved in busy schedule of life.
On the contrary some people believe that early schooling play a vital role in career building of any children. Today competition is involved in every vertical of life specially in professional stages.Parents therefore consider that if they provide early education to their children they must obtain a certain level before the actual time and this will lead them in advance education and career as well. Children can also learn how to participate in social gathering if they join school early because they will definitely learn from class environment which cannot be created at home.
Concluding all disadvantages and advantages I personally think that early education of children is become almost an important requirement of society and people should think and start early education for their young children because development of any nation is based upon young people.
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for example they involved in busy schedule of life.
for example they are involved in busy schedule of life.
that early schooling play a vital role
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basic education contribute a vital role
basic education contributes a vital role
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