Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to live in an apartment. Are there more advantages then disadvantages of living in a house. Compare with living in an apartment.
It is undeniable fact that the importance of standard living cannot be neglected in a healthy life. There are many options for living and some of them are become very popular now a day for example house and apartment. Both living options has their own advantages and disadvantages. Prior to jump any conclusion we need to rationalize the things first and see both the aspects carefully.
Privacy is a need for everyone this can be when you live in your house rather than an apartment. In some cases patients do not reach in hospital at time, as there is no emergency exit plan to build in an apart...
- It is generally accepted that families are not as close they used to be.Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought close together include any relevant example from your experience. 70
- Some people feel that entertainers e g film stars pop stars musicians or sports stars are paid too much money Do you agree or disagree Which other type of job should be highly paid 61
- Some People believe that children should be allowed to home and play until they are six or seven years.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school fro 78
- Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. 70
- Some people prefer to live in a house while others feel that there are more advantages to live in an apartment Are there more advantages then disadvantages of living in a house Compare with living in an apartment 92
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are becoming very popular nowadays
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 341 350
No. of Characters: 1621 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.297 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.754 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.718 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 113 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.747 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.368 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.578 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.206 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5