Some people believe that going to college is the best way to prepare for a successful future career; others think that people should go directly to work after leaving school and earn their experiences in business.
Education nowadays is put in every important area of growing country. It seems that teaching and learning process becomes significant in human-life. Cross the argument, it keys for us to think for the future education. Lack of people is impressing to carry on the future in the university. In opposite, there are some of us wanting to continue the study in life-experience or going to seek a job.
Correspondent with the first statement, to continue the study by learning in university is one of the best ways to get a bright future. The process of studying in university is contained by combining intelligentsia, skills, and behavior. It means, in college is not only about science as branch of education but also many ability-skills that we can deliver. In professional university, the students have been taught by quality teacher.
On the other hand, there some of fresh graduates from high school do not like to continue the learning process in formal way. They just need to practice the lessons in basic education on life experience. Actually, for seeking a job after graduate from high school need some best-full events for having lack of experiences. Therefore, it should not be trial and error activities. Usually, people who prefer to seek a job are gotten a law degree of occupation such as worker, maid, and penthouse. It happened, because they do not have much knowledge. Then, it just maintain their power of body for looking a job
In conclusion, there are many ways for getting a successful future. Firstly, fresh graduates can continue the study in the university and study about specific lessons. The lessons in university also related to look a job. Secondly, fresh graduates are able to practice their basic experiences in seeking a job. However, if they directly seek a job after graduate, they just will be an employee that works in a law degree.
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Sentence: Actually, for seeking a job after graduate from high school need some best-full events for having lack of experiences.
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