Some people believe that study is important to success, others say there is no relation between study and success. Discuss both views and give your opinion based on your experience.
Although success is a relative term which seems to have close connection with studies, it is unrealistic to think that study is the prerequisite for success, as it is achieved only by certain other prime factors such as determination, perseverance, hard work and dedication. In this essay, I would like to discuss both views and state my opinion from own experience.
To begin with, determination and perseverance plays an important role in gaining prosperity in any field. To be more clear, it is generally accepted that success comes along with any person if they determine and aim to reach the g...
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