Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is the better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In today’s world, balancing personal life is the most concern problem in the whole time. Especially for young people, they face the dilemma between to get a job or continue their education. Presently, most of the people tend to continue their education at university or college to get successful career. Indeed, getting academic achievement will be extremely difficult for those who are continuing their education. While the other people think that it is the best way to get a great career. I would argue that there is another way to get a great career which is getting a job directly after school....
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Sentence: Especially for young people, they face the dilemma between to get a job or continue their education.
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the great diploma often guarantee for a great career too.
the great diplomas often guarantee for a great career too.
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Avg. Sentence Length: 15.593 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.251 7.5
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No. of Words: 421 while No. of Different Words: 188
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 421 350
No. of Characters: 1989 1500
No. of Different Words: 188 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.53 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.724 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.556 2.4
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.133 0.07
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