Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives Which viewpoint do you agree with

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Nowadays, advertisements become more and more important. In fact , advertisements are most the powerful tools in market. All companies around the world use all kind of advertising to get more consumers. some people believe advertising causes they buy things that they do not need and some people do not agree with this idea.

In my opinion, goals of advertising is to encourages people to buy new stuff whether they need or not. Advertisements present goods in new style. people who create these advertisement most of the time use popularity people like actors or actress, to show how much our live become better if we will buy and use these goods. But in reality, we do not use all these stuff, or these goods are not compatible with our life style.

Every day we see a lot of advertisement in media, billboards or on walls. For example I see an advertising in TV that show how we can lose extra weight if we buy an especial device or use especial drugs. This kind of advertisement work on beauty, and most of the time women persuade to buy them. Although, they cannot get as the same result as they see in advertising.

To conclude, I think the advertisements that we see every day cannot improve our life style. It is very better, when we decide to buy new thing, first search about that, compare all brands, find their difference between them and see which one is better for our needs then buy it.

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