You have stayed in a hotel a couple of days for a business meeting and left a few personal belongings there. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel asking for help.
- Explain when you stayed in the hotel.
- What did you leave there?
- What would you like the manager to do about it?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you I just left one of my bags in your hotel from my last visiting.
I stayed at your hotel on the 10Th and 11th of July. I was in room 1452. When I arrived home, I realized I left one of my bags at the hotel. The bag is a small brown leather. You can find several thing inside it, include some personal photos, a few business card, an address book, a novel book and a sliver ring which it is very valuable for me.
When I leaved your hotel, I straight went to airport. At the airport and during my departure I did not notice whether my bag is exists or not. Since I have already checked missing and found department of both destination and source airport, I am sure I left my bag in your hotel.
I am very appreciate if you could check your missing and found department to see whether my bag there or not. Since the bag is very valuable to me, I am be grateful if you could send it to me via courier service. I have arranged to pay for the service.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Mari M.
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Sentence: At the airport and during my departure I did not notice whether my bag is exists or not.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to is and exists
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Duplicate words or sentences.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 202 200
No. of Characters: 790 1000
No. of Different Words: 106 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.77 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.911 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.248 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 43 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 33 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 15 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 6 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.538 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.919 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.154 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.441 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.647 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.212 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4