You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Task: Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to enquire about the Java programming seminar that will be held in your country in next summer.
Every year, all programmers from the whole world participated in this seminar and present the last techniques that they achieve. The seminar's certificate is very valuable, so I am very excited to be a part of this seminar. Therefore, would you please inform me about information blow?
1- When date exactly the seminar will be begun?
2- How long it will take? Is it more than seven days?
3- Could you tell me what I have to do to join?
4- How much I should to pay?
5- Should I book a hotel or there is an accommodation? Is accommodation free?
Could you please send me this information as soon as possible? I need this information, before apply a seat and buy a ticket.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Mari
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