Some People think it would be good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
PAPA (Indian Term for Father) which according to me IS “ PARENTS ARE PRECIOUS TO ALL.”
PARENTHOOD is a true feeling of being BLESSED. In today scenario nuclear families prevail. Both parents are working professionals therefore in this culture it’s very important that both parents are aware about what is needed for being a Good Parent. So the idea for schools to involve in teaching young person about parenting is definitely good thought which will contribute in many terms to society. My inclination is argued further.
In accordance to the former view, I strongly agree to it and would...
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Sentence: There a many books on parenting , which states that parenting is a big responsibility and everyone should be aware about this topic , if parenting is incorporated as a subject in schools to higher standards it will be very useful.
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