You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student of your first year arts – English Literature, batch 2008,residing in college shared accommodation, room no. 103. I am writing this to bring to your notice my dissatisfaction with respect to the accommodation allotted. There are few concerns due to which I am unable to adjust myself in the current situation and hoping that you can resolve the same.
Firstly, I would like to say that I am very calm and studious by nature. I have chosen college accommodation just with the intention to devote my quality time in studies, but these days I am facing lot of di...
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Sentence: I am literature student;
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 294 200
No. of Characters: 1339 1000
No. of Different Words: 161 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.141 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.554 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.751 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 94 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.615 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.81 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.409 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.622 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.209 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4