Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is generally accepted that social life education can be taught in school which is designed to train the children to be valuable part of the community. However, the parents roles should not be omitted because they also have responsibilties to do so.
To be a good personal in the society, firstly, children should be formally educated. In the school, they will learn a lot about human morality that classifies Good or bad moral values.. Moreover, they also learn about laws which Disseminate some regulations in social life and punishments if they break the rules and it would hugely benefit for their future as the member of society. Secondly, being in school is a transition phase for the children prior to associating in real and larger community. When children pursuing formal education system, they literally deal with new environment and people, which also occur in real social life.
However, the roles of parents in teaching their children to acquire proper abilities in community are as well essential. In fact, children spend more time in their home than school, it means domestic education have greater influences than formal education. Furthermore, Children naturally have tendency to imitate surrounding environment, including parents. Consequently, either father or mother should be a good role model to their kids and try to avoid any inappropriate behavior in front of them.
In summary, children should be educated either formal or informal ways, indeed, both parents and teachers collaboration plays enormous roles in preparing good community member.
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children should be educated either formal or informal ways,
children should be educated either in formal or informal ways,
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