There are more cars on the road these days and more accident. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test.
What do you think are advantages of repeat driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages.
The growth of cars on traffic system is in alarming phase and it is followed by a lot crashes. Some politicians argued that it is important to societies to follow the regular driving assessment in many times instead only once. This such a brilliant idea with some positives and negative in several aspects.
In order to build a safe road traffic, the thought of repeating test toward drivers is brought several advantages. First of all, it can improve people driving skills which benefit them in the future. For instances, the authority divide them into 3 different stages ; beginner, intermediate ...
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Sentence: This such a brilliant idea with some positives and negative in several aspects.
Description: what is the verb for this sentence?
Sentence: For instances, the authority divide them into 3 different stages ; beginner, intermediate and advance driver.
Description: The fragment authority divide them is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace divide with verb, past tense
it is important that the driver should familiar with.
it is important that the driver should be familiar with.
Sentence: Those ranks will indentify the improvement of driving skills which is unstable troughout in someones life.
Error: indentify Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: troughout Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: By regular assessment, the drivers could directly learn and implement the lattest rules and ask the Transport Official about unclear part of them.
Error: lattest Suggestion: latest
Sentence: In conclusion, regardless plus and minus of the repeatition of driving assessment, it could be very useful for the driver if the Transport Official design the comprehensive regular test combining some of new methods that help the drivers improve their driving skills and knowlegdes in a short time and low cost approach.
Error: repeatition Suggestion: repetition
Error: knowlegdes Suggestion: knowledge
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 275 350
No. of Characters: 1407 1500
No. of Different Words: 162 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.072 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.116 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.623 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.154 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.121 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.231 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.325 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.545 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.081 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5