Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays,sport is developing over the world.Successful sports professionals earn a great money. Sportsmen who take part in world championship,continent championship or Olympic games and show lucky results win various prizes including money premium. In addition, the governments which sportmen represent estimate them for their success. In many conditions ,this measurement is material. Beside that, the salary of people who are professional sportsmen is always be high. The best example for this topic may be footballers. Football players usually be rich.
In this theme,a lot of people assess their different opinions.According this,plenty of surveys have been done. Notions are very mixed. While their high wages are fair for toughts of a number of people. For their trouble in matches, these installments are right. For example, the richest football player in the world-Ronaldo is paid 93 million pounds by the team. Nevertheless, his game for team allow to say that, fee is suitable for him.
Moreover, giving money by government is also revenue of sportsmen. In most countries, government spend much money for their professional sportsmen. It is for that the country is being popular in the most world countries due to its sportsmen’s luck. Forallthat, from my point of view, some sport kinds are not necessary to spend more money.
In conclusion,sportsmen’s work is not easy. Today,professional sportsmen can earn much and in my opinion this is fair. In right,most people justify this process.
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