The table below shows information about travelling to work in one US city.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table describes how people travel to work in one US city. People use sharing car and public transport take the first position distance with average about 24 and 23 miles, while personal car is the next lower rank and about 17 miles average distance. However, the manual ride (cycle and walk) take the shortest distance which is about 4 miles average.
Based on the time during travelling, public transportation is the longest time by average 49 minutes. In the other side, people who use sharing car take average time 42 minutes and it is longer than personal car with average 33 minutes. Manual movement using cycle and walk take the shortest time average 20 minutes. People who go together with car is the greatest speed by average 34 mph. Personal car and public transportation’s position which is over 10 mph is higher than manual movement average itself.
In conclusion, working outside with long distance place and effective time needed is better if you use sharing car rather than public or personal car. Manual transportation using, is pretty good for short distance.
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People use sharing car and public transport take the first position
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which is about 4 miles average.
which is about 4 miles on average.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out o 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 182 200
No. of Characters: 878 1000
No. of Different Words: 96 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.673 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.824 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.448 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 66 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 45 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.969 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.465 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.623 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.174 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4