The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts provide information about the consumption of fruit juice and beer in different countries. The data is listed according to one person’s consumption per year. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the beer was consumed more than the fruit juice.
Ireland and Germany got the highest amount of beer consumed. Namely 155 and 119 liters. 106 liters of beer was on average drunk by one person in Austria, which is 8 liters bigger than figures for Belgium, Denmark and UK. The least proportion was consumed in Australia, US, Netherlands and Finland, decreasing from 89 to 79.
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 206 200
No. of Characters: 959 1000
No. of Different Words: 108 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.788 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.655 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 66 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.1 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.377 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.587 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.096 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4