Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today Are these shows a good method of finding talented people or they just entertainment

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Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today.
Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or they just entertainment?

Televised talent shows can be seen almost in each TV channel. These programmes aim to get talented inhabitants who have not been famous yet from every single region in many countries. There are numbers of inhabitants think that these are a nice way of finding new talented people. However, some people believe that those are just entertainment.

Getting popularity instantly is preferable way for some citizens. They tend to join televised talent shows to reach their success. “American Idol” and “American Got Talent” are some example of talent shows in the United States of America which express how interest citizens to television talent shows are. These become a golden opportunity for society who want to be an artist but does not have enough money to show their talent.

On the other hand, other inhabitants think that they are just a way businessmen to get high profit. Businessmen believe that, by televised talent shows, many investor will invest much money to their business with creating new superstars.

In my view, TV channel which provides this kind of programme will be famed too. There is much money which rotates everyday even everyhour because of this programme. Furthermore, there is no doubt that many talented inhabitants can be found from this programmme. Also, there are several kinds of enterprises which can run.

To put them in nutshell, televised talented shows provide some advantages for one country in term of economic. Besides, these programmes contribute for regenerating and creating new idols. So I firmly support to these shows although some citizens do not think so.

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Getting popularity instantly is preferable way for some citizens.
Getting popularity instantly is a preferable way for some citizens.

are some example of talent shows
are some examples of talent shows

many investor will invest
many investors will invest

in term of economic.
in term of economy.

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