Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Today television has become “must have item” in every house. It becomes more populer because it is easier to get and cheaper than before. Many people become so addictive to watch television in order to relax their mind. Besides, television provides some news so people can obtain a lot of informations easily without requiring to go out from home. It is true that television gives some adventages to people such as providing some useful informations and giving entertainment. While, I believe that there are also several disadvantages of watching television frequently that can cause problem in individual’s life.

As mentioned before, television now becomes reachable item which almost every people can afford. It is rare to see a house without television. People want to have television because it gives benefit for them such as giving much informations which happen recently around the world and entertaining the audience with its show when they get bored. It can be a good investment to someone who has it. People do not need to pay much to get it, but it is possible to use it in a long term.

However, in many case it also can give some drawbacks. For example, it can destroy family life. Most people that have television prefer to stay in home watch tv instead of doing other social activity outside home. It certainly can destroy their relationship with others. Such circumstances can make relationship of people untight. People become individualistic and rare to talk each other. Besides, television’s show are not always good to watch. Sometimes tv station broadcast show which is not apropriate to children so it can affect their mind. Therefore, people have to be concern about the other side of television.

In sum, many television gives several advantages to people but we also have to take its drawbacks into account. Television can be dangerous if it can make people forget about their life and their activities.

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Sentence: It becomes more populer because it is easier to get and cheaper than before.
Error: populer Suggestion: popular

Sentence: It is true that television gives some adventages to people such as providing some useful informations and giving entertainment.
Error: adventages Suggestion: advantages

Sentence: Sometimes tv station broadcast show which is not apropriate to children so it can affect their mind.
Error: apropriate Suggestion: appropriate

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