Televison is dangerous because destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?
Nowadays, information and entertainment are important for somepeople who stay in the big city or the center city as wll as this is globalisation era. The globalisasion era make information unlimitied, one of information edia is television. In this era, watching television become bad habbite so some people think televesion not good for family life but somepeople also suggest about positif impact for improving knowladge and information. Below I will explain it.
Some the reason why television make posistif impact because televison is method for improv knowladge and information in that it television is needed for some family who work like business owner and it have opinion televission become to destroys family life because of it’s do not rule at home whose create scdule for all mamber family so that way television become postif impact.
However, television for some family had a bad view. Television made the first member of the family is busy with watching television so that the pattern of communication among the members of exit did not go well. The Second. Why do some parents felt dangerous because television will form a child's character so that children believe in what watchable on television than on her parents because of the frequency of watching that often. The third view of parents make a child into a lazy learning.
In conclusion, Television has a negative and positive impact. But I believe when television can be arranged with either the Word then television would be something beneficial to add to knowledge and information.
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Sentence: The globalisasion era make information unlimitied, one of information edia is television.
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Sentence: Some the reason why television make posistif impact because televison is method for improv knowladge and information in that it television is needed for some family who work like business owner and it have opinion televission become to destroys family life because of it's do not rule at home whose create scdule for all mamber family so that way television become postif impact.
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Sentence: But I believe when television can be arranged with either the Word then television would be something beneficial to add to knowledge and information.
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Sentence: Nowadays, information and entertainment are important for somepeople who stay in the big city or the center city as wll as this is globalisation era.
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Sentence: In this era, watching television become bad habbite so some people think televesion not good for family life but somepeople also suggest about positif impact for improving knowladge and information.
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Sentence: Some the reason why television make posistif impact because televison is method for improv knowladge and information in that it television is needed for some family who work like business owner and it have opinion televission become to destroys family life because of it's do not rule at home whose create scdule for all mamber family so that way television become postif impact.
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