Essay topics:
Televison is dangerous because destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?
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Essay Categories
Sentence: Firstly, in modern global television is very important for console our family.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to console and our
Sentence: Television benefits for get a knowledges and experiences in some of programs.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and get
Sentence: Watching television make peoples can be lazy and decreased interaction and communication with the others include your family.
Description: The fragment television make peoples is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
because that is can be relaxing and happy.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a modal auxillary
Suggestion: Refer to is and can
Sentence: However, some of people prefer to interaction and gathering with our family or friends instead watching television because that is get a some of experience in society life.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and get
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Words: 254 350
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 254 350
No. of Characters: 1283 1500
No. of Different Words: 111 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.992 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.051 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.683 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.652 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.432 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.604 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.163 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5