Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.

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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.

Nowadays, we take any popular consumer goods sales it's highly depends on advertising in some situations I agree with your opinion.

Firstly, the media spread on overall world the usage of media also increased people can use this media in different ways and the media also support the people. Some people like business magnates uses famous people like celebrities because improve our business. The huge affection between celebrities and normal public in this reason our favourite star to do any product advertising public blindly purchased that product they do not see the quality and other things.

Secondly, for example of this stars especially actress to do any cosmetic advertisement people especially ladies and youth girls just simply see the actress add but not see the quality of cosmetic. Lot of advertising companies produce their ads with popular stars to earn lot of money. In this total process only benifit stars and advertising companies.People are blindly losing their money.

Thirdly, People blindly purchase some branded companies products in this scenario people how much money to spent on that product they gain equal benefits there is no doubt on in this because the all companies are recognised over all world for example of some shoe companies like adidas and nike.

Finally, to purchase any product first you should see that is recognised or not and after that see the quality of product.You shouldn't purchase blindly.

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Sentence: Thirdly, People blindly purchase some branded companies products in this scenario people how much money to spent on that product they gain equal benefits there is no doubt on in this because the all companies are recognised over all world for example of some shoe companies like adidas and nike.
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Sentence: In this total process only benifit stars and advertising companies.People are blindly losing their money.
Error: benifit Suggestion: benefit

Sentence: Thirdly, People blindly purchase some branded companies products in this scenario people how much money to spent on that product they gain equal benefits there is no doubt on in this because the all companies are recognised over all world for example of some shoe companies like adidas and nike.
Error: recognised Suggestion: recognized

Sentence: Finally, to purchase any product first you should see that is recognised or not and after that see the quality of product.You shouldn't purchase blindly.
Error: recognised Suggestion: recognized

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