Topic Smoking should be banned completely in your country Do you agree or disagree

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Topic: Smoking should be banned completely in your country. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, smoking becomes more common in not only developed countries, but also in developing countries. We have already known that smoking is harmful for our health but many people start it each year. In my opinion, I totally agree with the idea that smoking should be banned completely in our country for several reasons.

To begin with, smoking is injurious to smokers’ health. In fact, cigarettes contain over 700 chemical additives, including carbon, nicotine, heavy metals, pesticides… added into a cigarette. They are really dangerous and cause bad effects to smokers, startin...

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