Topic: Some people believed that we can get information from news while others think that we can’t trust the journalists.
Discussion!
Nowadays, there are many ways to get information. Some people believed that we can accumulate knowledge from news while others claim that we can not trust the journalists. Both sides of the issue will be analyzed in my writing.
I am partly convinced by the former ideal that reading news is one of the most popular methods to enhance learning. Firstly, it is easy to recognize that when we read news, we can remember information better than others ways. Obviously, news which is provided by newspaper, electronic newspaper, and television is hot, multiform about many frontiers in the world. From entertainment information to economic ones, all of them help us to get a comprehensive knowledge. In our modern society, only because news is indicated by various resources are people able to learn every time, every where.
However, it is undeniable that not all information which are got from news and we can’t absolutely believe in journalists for following reasons. Truth be told, some newspaper offices want to make money in any circumstances, even they encourage their employees to provide wrong information about the star movies, politic to attract audience. Sadly enough, many journalists are willing to make up story to cheat readers. Besides, information is too diversified so sometimes, the journalists received incorrect news while want to provide information as quickly as possible.
Equally important, our management-system lack of the disciplines. Only because this reason can the tabloids exist, even contributing to distrust of the readers.
In summarize, each ideal has its own validity so we should know how to filter news. It is high time that the authorities had to manage information resources strictly
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Sentence: Besides, information is too diversified so sometimes, the journalists received incorrect news while want to provide information as quickly as possible.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to while and want
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No. of Words: 275 350
Sentence Length SD: 5.648 7.5
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 275 350
No. of Characters: 1409 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.072 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.124 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.924 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.188 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.648 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.312 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.32 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.507 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.093 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5