The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000.
Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons.
These pie charts show the wold population changing in 100 years from 1900 until 2000.
These charts show that Asia and Europe (include Russia) are the biggest population of the world than the other regions.
In 100 years between 1900 and 2000 the percentage of population changing of the world in Asia and Europe were decreased. Asia declined from 60% to 54% while Europe dropped from 25% to 14% of world population. On the contrary, the percentage of world population in Africa increased from 4,5% to 10% while Latin America grew from 3% to 8%. It shows that the highest increasing of world population was Africa with 5,5%. While the other region has changed the number of world population, the community of North America showed a level off and stayed at 5%. Both the population of The Middle East and North Africa, a new region in 2000 showed their population of the world in 6%. The others showed their percentage of world population changed in a lowest number from 2,5% to 3%.
In conclusion, these chart shows that the percentage of world population changing are not balance in all of regions.
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Sentence: These pie charts show the wold population changing in 100 years from 1900 until 2000.
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