We have been living in the nuclear age now for over half a century. Since the first atomic bombs were developed, nuclear technology has provided governments with the ability to totally destroy the planet. Yet the technology has been put to positive use as an energy source and in certain areas of medicine.
To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?
Nowadays, nuclear has been developed as one of potential energy resources to support human activities and development. Nevertheless, this kind of resources has danger with it besides its tremendous potential benefits.
Nuclear, if being used as a weapon, can eliminate and create a great destruction within a large surrounding, such as cities or even countries, and leave chronic diverse effects on the site as well as on the organisms within it. Hiroshima and Nagasaki could be a perfect example of this, the cities were bomb using nuclear and experienced a total destruction. Even though the artificial environment, including buildings and infrastructure, has been rebuilt, however, the natural environment has never been recovered, and all of exposed organisms would never grow as well as before and potentially bequeath the adverse effect to their generations.
On the other hand, nuclear, with a good approach, can lead to advantage humankind. It is an alternative energy resource to stop human’s addicts on non-renewable resources; oil, gas, coal, to generate their humankind activities. Another benefit is that nuclear does not produce carbon emissions which are responsible for environmental problems such as global warming and climate change.
However, to set nuclear as an energy resource requires careful treatment, where any accident occurring within the nuclear generator can risk its surrounding’s sustainability, even can cause a boom-like-effect.
To sum up, nuclear is just like other kinds of technology, it can lead to advantage or disadvantage humankind, depending on who and how using it.
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