You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much.
Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also suggest any improvements to make things better.
Dear sir,
I’m writing in connection with the party my friends had organized last week at your wonderful restaurant, celebrating my birthday.
I’m very grateful to you for the memorable dinner we had; food was delicious. I have to admit that I didn’t think an English men could prepare Italian cuisine, but I had to change my mind. I especially remember the great taste of your “spaghetti alla carbonara”, which for a moment took me back to my childhood in Rome.
Service was perfect too: waitresses were polite and every meal arrived at the right time. Moreover it has been very fun...
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