You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
I am a person who likes to travel. I think traveling is a great opportunity to meet new people, gain more knowledge and experience, and learn new customs and traditions. I did not travel a lot yet, but I am sure I will have a chance to do it. So, if I had the opportunity to visit a foreign country I would visit England. I think it is a great and very interesting country with unusual traditions and beautiful sights. In the following paragraphs I will give some reasons to support my choice.
First of all, it is vital to note that I am found of English literature and music, films and f...
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