More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
Nowadays studying abroad becomes very popular among students. I agree that it is a great opportunity for future life and I believe that there are more benefits than drawbacks.
Many students choose to study abroad because there are greater opportunities in a particular foreign country. Foreign universities may offer better facilities or courses. They may also be more prestigious than universities in the student’s own city and have teachers who are experts in their fields. Therefore, by studying abroad, students can expend their knowledge and gain qualifications that open the door to better job opportunities. A period of study abroad can also broaden students’ horizons. In the new country, they will have to live and work with other students of various nationalities. Thus, overseas young people are open to different cultures, customs and traditions.
On the other hand, living away from home for many students can be challenging and many of them can feel homesick and miss their families. This problem can have a bad effect on the study in university. Studying abroad is not an easy thing and some students can have problems with visa applications or problems in the embassy office. Language barrier can cause serious difficulties, living and studying in the new foreign country. In order to study abroad students have to find accommodations and also pay bills. This can be hard to earn this money or it will be difficult for parents to finance this.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the benefits of studying abroad, in term of better universities and great opportunities for future career, do outweigh the drawbacks.
- You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice. 78
- Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations.Is it appropriate for a magazine or new 65
- In some countries students who misbehave have to leave the school and are not allowed to continue their education In other countries they can return to their studies after a suspension period Discuss both options and give your opinion 52
- Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their courses in foreign countries While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students it also has a number of disadvantages 64
- Children nowadays prefer electronic games to other games and toys Why is it happening Is it a positive or a negative trend 50
flaws:
No. of Words: 266 350
No. of Characters: 1335 1500
No. of Different Words: 147 200
Write the essay with more vocabulary words.
More words, more marks.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 266 350
No. of Characters: 1335 1500
No. of Different Words: 147 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.039 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.019 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.785 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 96 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.689 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.342 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.513 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.07 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5