Studying abroad benefits Students in a great way. The Students who tend to study abroad get to study in a diverse environment, where students from different countries study together, that helps them get great exposure and learn about different Cultures. They also get great number of Employment Opportunities while studying abroad, which helps you grow as a professional by working in a different environment. The big pro of studying abroad is that it helps them immigrate to that country in a much easier way, so when they do finish their education, they may start working there and make a decent living.
This trend also has a massive impact on the countries that are involved. Their economies get boosted in pretty decent way. Their Educational Industries grows at a much faster pace as compared to the countries that aren't known for offering Education to the International Institutes. So in a nutshell, The countries involved in this make a decent amount of money, which helps them building their country and offering benefits to their Citizens.
There are a few Drawbacks to this trend. The Citizens of the countries involved do get limited Career Opportunities as there is a huge chunk of Students who tend to stay and start working in that Country. Another Drawback is that the Students are spending a lot of money as compared to the education offered at their homeland. Which also has a fair negative impact on the Country's economy as their Citizens are opting to Study abroad instead of Studying at their homeland.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a great way" with adverb for "great"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
Studying abroad benefits Students in a great way. The Students who tend to study abroad ...
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Suggestion:
... Cultures. They also get great number of Employment Opportunities while studying ...
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Suggestion: aren't
... pace as compared to the countries that arent known for offering Education to the Int...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to build' or 'build'.
Suggestion: to build; build
...ecent amount of money, which helps them building their country and offering benefits to ...
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Suggestion:
... instead of Studying at their homeland.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9765625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73378341815 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0467934458 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273843317773 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116289553751 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852934783188 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19334069671 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788800371883 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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