Young people in the modern world seem to be more power and influence than any pervious young generation.why is this in case? What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people?
It is obvious young people have vital activity roles in modern world rather than their parents and they have more influence because they have better education systems and thanks to increasing technology they can develop their knowledge ten times as much as previous young people. Their universities provide modern facilities for them that lead to discovering new aspects of science and being more power in recent decades.
They not only can communicate with each other entire the world easily via the internet but they also gather useful information by joining to science network that are made in the internet and keep them up to date about any subject that they want which is why they seem to be more power and influence while the previous young generation not only had not any facilities to help them improving their knowledge but they also could not communicate with each other to exchange their information so that to develop their knowledge.
These reasons lead to increasing the gap among young people and old people which would not be if the old people have been equipped by better technologies and also these days they tried to adopt with these situations and tried to understand how to treat with their young children.
In conclusion I think both young people and old people not only do not want to decline the gap which happened by different beliefs but they also make this gap more and more when they do not try to spend more time with together and helping each other to understand their exceptions.
Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
---|---|---|---|
2012-08-20 | maryam2900 | 64 | view |
- College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field. 56
- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state even if these areas could be developed for economic gain 50
- Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal 69
- Integrated, TPO 25 90
- Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 86
Sentence: In conclusion I think both young people and old people not only do not want to decline the gap which happened by different beliefs but they also make this gap more and more when they do not try to spend more time with together and helping each other to understand their exceptions.
Description: The fragment with together and is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace together with adjective
flaws:
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 259 350
No. of Characters: 1244 1500
No. of Different Words: 132 200
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 72 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 259 350
No. of Characters: 1244 1500
No. of Different Words: 132 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.012 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.803 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.354 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 72 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 43.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 26.416 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.474 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.773 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.173 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5