Young people in the modern world seem to be more power and influence than any pervious young generation.why is this in case? What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people?
It is obvious young people have vital activity roles in modern world rather than their parents and they have more influence because they have better education systems and thanks to increasing technology they can develop their knowledge ten times as much as previous young people. Their universities provide modern facilities for them that lead to discovering new aspects of science and being more power in recent decades.
They not only can communicate with each other entire the world easily via the internet but they also gather useful information by joining to science network that are made in the internet and keep them up to date about any subject that they want which is why they seem to be more power and influence while the previous young generation not only had not any facilities to help them improving their knowledge but they also could not communicate with each other to exchange their information so that to develop their knowledge.
These reasons lead to increasing the gap among young people and old people which would not be if the old people have been equipped by better technologies and also these days they tried to adopt with these situations and tried to understand how to treat with their young children.
In conclusion I think both young people and old people not only do not want to decline the gap which happened by different beliefs but they also make this gap more and more when they do not try to spend more time with together and helping each other to understand their exceptions.
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