Apology letter to your neighbor about the noise from your flat.
In your letter, explain the reasons for the noise, apologize and what action will you take?
Dear Mrs Adams,
How are you doing? I hope all is well at your side. The reason why I am composing this letter to you is because I would like to apologize for the disturbance that were created for you by us last night.
Yesterday, I organized a medium-sized dinner party for my family in occasion for my graduation. I had invited my family over to spread my happiness with regards to that. My family is quite large consisting four brothers, two sisters and of course my parents. My brothers and sisters have three children each combined with two children of my own so all together 20 children in t...
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Comments
Hi, Thanks for your rating
Hi,
Thanks for your rating but the essay is written within 20 minutes not more than that.
Well, it is OK to put content
Well, it is OK to put content as much as possible but in 20 minutes.
this chaos is not repeated again at all.
this chaos is not repeated at all.
flaws:
No. of Words: 308 200
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 10
No. of Words: 308 200
No. of Characters: 1352 1000
No. of Different Words: 187 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.189 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.39 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.251 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.118 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.352 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.353 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.324 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.573 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.167 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4