The chart below describes results of a public opinion poll, where people were asked to name the most important place smoking should be banned from.
The pie chart reveals the survey result about the most important places where people think smoking should be prohibited.
According to the survey results, the majority of people think that work places should be banned for smoking with 21% respondents, followed by public restaurants with 19% and the third largest among the group is shopping malls with 18%. In addition to that public amenities like beaches and transport are places not favourable to smoke with 13% and 11% respectively. Then the remaining 15% respondents say, places like bus stops and teacher's lounges are also part of important areas to be smoke free zones. However the least number of people agreed that places like pubs is an area not allowed to smoke, with only 3% out of all respondents.
To sum up, the greatest number of people said that smoking should not be allowed in working places. While places to unwind like pubs is the most conducive place to smoke.
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