The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart given supplies an overview concerned about the global population percentages and wealth rates through the diverse areas.
Conversely, the first fact to note in the former is that three places namely: North America, Europe and Rich Asia-Pacific are in precedence over the rest of the areas ( which are: 34%, 30% and 24% respectively) whereas China and India revealed their upward trend in terms of population rates ( 24 % and 16% respectively).
Regarding the vertical bar chart, it is readily apparent that in category global wealth both Africa and India are comprised of 2% and Africa is slightly higher than Latin America & Caribbean and Rich Asia-Pacific in category population percentages ( 10%, 7.5% and 5% respectively).
Overall, the places which are in advance in category global wealth have low percentages in comparison with the other places in terms of population rates whilst, in contrast, the places which take the priority over the rest of the areas in category population percentages suffered from low rates in category global wealth.
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The bar chart given supplies an overview concerned about the global population percentages
The bar chart given supplies an overview concern about the global population percentages
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