The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams describe information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000. The diagram also give prediction and projection information for 2050.
In 2002, Yemen has the highest population in age 0-14 with procent 50,1. The second position there were people in age 15-19 years with procent 46,3 and the lowest population has to old age +60 years with number 3,6 %. In 2050 the population in Yemen has predicted that people with age 15-19 years will increase amount 11,3% and the age of 0-14 will decrease amount 13,1%. People with age 60+ will has small increasing number 2,1%.
In Italy from 2000 to 2050 the population in the age 15-19 were projected will has significantly decreasing amount 15,4%. Population in age 60+ will has big increasing with procent 16,2 and there will small changes in population of age 0-14 years with number 1,7%.
To sum up, there will several changes of population from 2000 to 2050 both in Yemen and Italy.
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The second position there were people in age 15-19 years
The second position goes to people in the age 15-19 years old
will has small increasing number
will have a small increasing number
the population in the age 15-19 were projected will has significantly decreasing
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Sentence: In 2002, Yemen has the highest population in age 0-14 with procent 50,1.
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Sentence: The second position there were people in age 15-19 years with procent 46,3 and the lowest population has to old age 60 years with number 3,6 .
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Sentence: Population in age 60 will has big increasing with procent 16,2 and there will small changes in population of age 0-14 years with number 1,7.
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.183 0.07
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