The pie charts illustrate a comparison for the number of years for people from Yemen and Italy in 2000 and an estimate for 2050.
Overal, the majority of people in Yemen are between the ages of 0-14years, as above 60 hold a lesser percentage. It is estimated that in 50years time the greatest part of the population will comprise of the ages between 15 -59 years, whilst 60 years plus will be marginalised. Further, greater proportion of the people in Italy is composed of able bodied people between 15-59years, while children below 14years occupy the least number. In future it is foreseen that in Italy, the majority of the population will consists of both 15-59 and above 60 years, as below 14 will be few.
Highlighted on the chart, half of the population in Yemen comprises of children below the age of 14years, whilst adults above 60years are very few, as they occupy about one tenth. It is projected that in 50 years time, the majority of people will consists of children and adults from 15 to 59years, while the 60 years plus remain an isolated number.
Furthermore, the population of Italy in 2000 has a greater percentage of 61.6 for able bodied, whilst infants and children below 14, was the minority group. In 2050; despite, children and adults being the majority of the people, at 46.2 percent; 60years plus age group is following closely at 42.3 percent, whereas ages between 0-14 years bears an insignificant number.
It can be clearly seen that, in Yemen the proportion of above 60s remain lower in both given periods. There will be a huge decrease in population for children below 14 from 50.1 % to 37%, whilst for children and adults, there will be a rise from 46.3% to 57.3%. In Italy, ages of 15-59years remain the majority of the population, as 0-14years remains marginalised. Comparing Yemen and Italy, overally ages between 15-59years has the greatest percentage of the population, while 0-14 years is median and lastly above 60s are marginalised.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ate for 2050. Overal, the majority of people in Yemen are between the ages of ...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: WILL_COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'will be composed of' or 'will comprise' or 'will consist of'?
Suggestion: will be composed of; will comprise; will consist of
...ime the greatest part of the population will comprise of the ages between 15 -59 years, whilst 6...
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Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...he greatest part of the population will comprise of the ages between 15 -59 years, whilst 6...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'consist'
Suggestion: consist
...ly, the majority of the population will consists of both 15-59 and above 60 years, as be...
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... chart, half of the population in Yemen comprises of children below the age of 14years, whil...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'consist'
Suggestion: consist
...years time, the majority of people will consists of children and adults from 15 to 59yea...
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Suggestion:
...ent; 60years plus age group is following closely at 42.3 percent, whereas ages be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, lastly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 33.7804878049 195% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 965.302439024 179% => OK
No of words: 354.0 196.424390244 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87853107345 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63051538453 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429378531073 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 283.868780488 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 1.07073170732 747% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2933062924 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.357142857 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178710009429 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803539294609 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061489135933 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133450687435 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620265514513 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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