Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.

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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.

This map illustrates the development of Chorleywood village whose population went up gradually since mid 19th century. Initially, Chorleywood was least developed village situated on one of the main roads in front of Chorleywood Park and Golf course during the period of 1968-1983. Railway was introduced in 1909 in this village. As a result, development started towards Chorleywood railway station from 1883-1922. Till 1970, the railway tract remained the moderately developed area of the village. After that, motorway was build towards the backside of Chorleywood Park crossing the railway line and one of the main roads in 1970. As this was the one of the fastest transportation way, so this area progressed more quickly from 1970-1994. Resultantly, over the period of last 24 years, development of Chorleywood village was highest along motorway and railway. However, overall population growth was observed to be stable over whole period of time.

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